Tuesday, January 6, 2009

it gives you wings

well i started over and i think that i will be doing things around this concept. shows prodoct and my spokes person.



3 comments:

Eugene Hoban said...

does it bother any one else? something seems very off about it to me.

Phong Nguyen said...

As Burleigh would say, what's your idea for this? We can't give you a crit unless we know what your intentions are.

That hat looks weird since he's wearing a suit with a fisherman hat. Could be the new trend though.I think you need to refine the head and hands silhouettes more too. He's kicking him in the head. I'd move the big can to the left since you got that big swoosh leading to the left and make it smaller and not wedged up against the corner like that. You still have my keys?

Eugene Hoban said...

i was thinking to leave that space on the left for some type.
i'll kip working on it.
and yes i still have the keys.